It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodos …). There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

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few centuries, it is becoming increasingly difficult to find

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evidence of the existence of many

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on our planet. There is a school of thought that

animals

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going to

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extinct because it is a natural process.

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topic is becoming more and more divisive these days and , the majority

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think it is necessary to save these

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the following will explore the different reasons regarding responsibility and economic balance. The primary reason

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more

species

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are suffering from in risk of going extinct is

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human activities and

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humans

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have to take

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responsibility. Organizations and groups who focus on wildlife

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claim that

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live with equal privilege, but human activities over

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centuryyears

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have largely negetively affected

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habitats of

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example, city

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happed

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expanding urban areas have drastically in the past ten years, the concrete jungle has deprived

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the homes

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of many

animals

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in danger.

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like the Southern Chinese tiger once were in extreme danger of

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, which simply because of the overuse of land leading to a direct lack

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of food

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needed for

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survival

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will be impossible to see

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creatures

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anymore.

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extinction

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could

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put a genuine risk

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ecosystem

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.

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chain in our

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,

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requires different

species

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for reasonsAdditionally, humans should take action because the

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requires biodiversity. Lack

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of certain

species

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often leads to unrecoverable irreversible consequences.

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, In Australia, there was a period of time

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when hunters killed too

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many haunted

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wolves

and foxes, causing the number of rabbits

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up

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in a short

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time populations

to suddenly rise. These rabbits consumed too

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much

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grass that many fields had been eaten up with nothing

leftused

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left used

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to feed their

lifestock

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livestock

. These fields have been extremely difficult to

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turned out extremely hard to get recovered.

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, to maintain the balance of

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environment and

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,

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to

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of

animals

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is necessary. In conclusion, there

is

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are numerous

specious

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species

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suffered

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on the brink

offrom

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of

extinction

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themselves

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progress, and humans have to make up

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this

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must remedy

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these

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mistakes

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by taking proactive actions to combat animal

extinction

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.

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is not only

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our children

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see more beautiful

creatures

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future

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generations, but

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to protect our

ecosystem

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from destruction anymore present threats.