The charts below show information about the percentage of government spending on education, the average number of years of education completed and the average annual income per person in US dollars in five different countries in 2010.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the government expenditure on
education
in 5 different countries in 2010, while
the other chart show
how many years of study Change the verb form
shows
completed
Add a missing verb
were completed
as well as
the average income
per capita in each country in US dollars.
Overall
, South Africa remained
the highest percentage of money imposed Verb problem
had
to
Change preposition
on
education
, while
Ireland being
the Verb problem
had
fewest
number of money spent. In terms of how many Correct word choice
lowest
year
used and the annual Change to a plural noun
years
income
per person, Switzerland experienced the longest year
spent for education
and the highest income
.
To begin
with, the first figure showed that the first country who
spent above 15% of their money Correct pronoun usage
that
to
Change preposition
on
education
was only South africa
. Change the capitalization
Africa
Three
countries, including Switzerland, Bangladesh, and China, annual spending Change preposition
In three
were hovered
between the range Change to the active voice
hovered
have hovered
10
% to 15%. Only a small number of educational funding were spent by Ireland's government, approximately 9%.
The second figure Change preposition
of 10
represents
that Switzerland's Verb problem
shows
education
was
the longest time to finish and Verb problem
took
highest
annual wage per person, accounting for 13 years with 57,000 Correct article usage
the highest
dollar
per Change to a plural noun
dollars
year
. Furthermore
, Ireland's year
of Fix the agreement mistake
years
education
and annual income
was
higher than Correct subject-verb agreement
were
remaining
countries, which were South Correct article usage
the remaining
africa
, China, and Bangladesh, with Bangladesh Change the capitalization
Africa
remained
the Wrong verb form
remaining
least
Correct your spelling
last
year
of education
spent and annual wage.Submitted by dewifarraprasasya on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, income, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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