The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among UK residents in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar above illustrates the percentage of UK
residents
total spending in 2004 on 3 categories, food and drink, restaurant and hotel, and entertainment. The data describe Change noun form
resident's
residents'
expenditure
that vary among 5 types of age ranges.
Fix the agreement mistake
expenditures
Overal
, there is no general trend but we can see that Correct your spelling
Overall
the
older Correct article usage
apply
citizen
consume Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
higher
food and drink rather than the younger. In Correct word choice
more
addiotion
, the Correct your spelling
addition
noticable
information from the data is the Correct your spelling
noticeable
sharply
difference among the consumption at range 61-75.
People with age more than 76 hits the peak of spending up 20%, similar Change the adverb
sharp
with
the need Change preposition
to
of
entertainment at the age range 61-75. Change preposition
for
This
is the highest number of expenditure in 2004. People under 30 prefer to choose
pay more for Add the particle
choose to
restaurant
and Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
hotel
. Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
In contrast
, people coming
from 61-Verb problem
apply
75
years old do not see that it is Change preposition
to 75
important
thing, their cost only Add an article
the important
an important
reach
a little higher Correct subject-verb agreement
reaches
from
zero. Change preposition
than
Furthermore
, from the percentage among 31-45 years old
residents, there Correct your spelling
45-year-old
is
Change the verb form
are
slightly
differences towards the categories of food-drink and restaurant-hotel.Change the adverb
slight
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