The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among UK residents in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar above illustrates the percentage of UK

residents

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total spending in 2004 on 3 categories, food and drink, restaurant and hotel, and entertainment. The data describe

expenditure

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expenditures

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that vary among 5 types of age ranges.

Overal

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, there is no general trend but we can see that

the

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older

citizen

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citizens

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consume

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food and drink rather than the younger. In

addiotion

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addition

, the

noticable

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noticeable

information from the data is the

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difference among the consumption at range 61-75. People with age more than 76 hits the peak of spending up 20%, similar

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the need

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entertainment at the age range 61-75.

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is the highest number of expenditure in 2004. People under 30 prefer to

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pay more for

restaurant

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restaurants

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and

hotel

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hotels

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In contrast

, people

coming

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from 61-

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years old do not see that it is

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thing, their cost only

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a little higher

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zero.

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, from the percentage among 31-

45 years old

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45-year-old

residents, there

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slightly

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differences towards the categories of food-drink and restaurant-hotel.

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The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among UK residents in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Many universities graduates cannot find a job in their choosen profession. What factors may have caused this situation and what is your opinion, should be done about it?

Some people opine that entertainment or leisure activities should be subsidized by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries?

Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively.

Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, hoever, think that others types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion