The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among UK residents in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below illustrates the citizen's expenditure in the UK
categoriez
in 5 age groups in 2004. Correct your spelling
category
Overall
, the data shows the older the citizen
, the more they need food and drink.
The expenditure Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
of
food and drink when the UK resident was under 30 was about 6% Change preposition
on
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Then
, the spending of it increased gradually at
23% Change preposition
to
as
a peak when they were over 76 Change preposition
apply
years
old. On the other hand
, the need of
entertainment and Change preposition
for
restaurant
& Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
Correct word choice
and hotel
hotel
fluctuated among Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
that
ages. When they were under 30, the total spending Correct determiner usage
those
of
Change preposition
on
restaurant
& Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
Correct word choice
and hotel
hotel
was 14%, Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
then
minimally decline
Wrong verb form
declined
at
12% when they were 31-60 Change preposition
to
years
old. The need of
that Change preposition
for
then
dropped at
only 2% when the citizens at the ages of 61-75 and slightly jumped Change preposition
to
at
7% after that age. Meanwhile, the spending Change preposition
to
of
entertainment Change preposition
on
got
6% when the Verb problem
was
citizen
Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
was
under 30 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
years
old. On
the following ages, that spending got a peak at 23% in the group of 61-75 Change preposition
In
years
old and sharply jumped down at just 7% at
the group of over 76 Change preposition
in
years
old.Submitted by dyahkusumaningrum18 on
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