The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among UK residents in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart shows citizens'

expenditure

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in the UK in three categories - food and drink, restaurant and hotel, and entertainment.

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, citizens aged more than 30 tend to spend their money on food and drink.

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, entertainment

expenditure

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also

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increases as the

age

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group

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gets older.

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, the tendency to spend expenses on

restaurant

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restaurants

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and

hotel

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hotels

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decreases when people's

age

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is high. Specifically,

expenditure

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about

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restaurant

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restaurants

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and

hotel

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hotels

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is significantly lower between the 61 and 75

age

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group

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, indicating around 3 per cent.

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, spending money on entertainment in the same

age

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group

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reached more than 20 per cent.

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percentage are same with the

age

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group

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more 76, who spend their money on food and drink. Meanwhile, the

group

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of under 30 marked the lowest percentage of total spending.

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this

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chart shows that there are deviations regarding using citizen's

expenditure

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among the

age

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groups in the UK.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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4 paragraphs

152 words

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