The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictures below
illustrates
the Change the verb form
illustrate
college
building now and the idea of development of it in 2020.
Overall
, the college
had the
major changes in Correct article usage
apply
garden
, footpath, Add an article
the garden
also
size and position of classroom
, reception, car park, library, lunch Add an article
the classroom
a classroom
are
, and toilet. Correct your spelling
area
New
building of Add an article
The new
A new
shop
Correct article usage
the shop
indicates
in the future plan.
Wrong verb form
is indicated
Garden
and footpath in the Correct article usage
The garden
college
will be removed in 2020, as a
result
the car park area will have a larger space. The gate in the building will be Add the comma(s)
result,
realocated
on the other side which Correct your spelling
relocated
reallocated
nearer
Add a missing verb
is nearer
from
Change preposition
to
bus
stop and road. Correct article usage
the bus
Consequently
, the toilet will be rebuilt on the behind. In the future, the campus will have more classrooms than now due to
the reception office was
rebuilt smaller in the middle of the Wrong verb form
is being
college
, so that the students have more easy
access. Correct word choice
easier
Lunch
area was Correct article usage
The lunch
realocated
near from new shop which can Correct your spelling
located
accomodate
the Correct your spelling
accommodate
need
of students and teachers.Fix the agreement mistake
needs
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words college with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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