the system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. this is causing problems for you and your neighbours. write a letter to the local rubbish collection system is not working properly. write a letter to the local council. in your letter describe how the ruubish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours suugest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam,

This

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letter is pertaining to the rubbish collection problem which is not happening properly at our place and

due to

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this

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problem me and my neighbours are suffering a lot.

Firstly

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, I would like to inform you that garbage collection is not working as per schedule in my area.

Furthermore

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, the concerned team member is not properly collecting the garbage.

Secondly

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due to

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this

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issue my family members and neighbours are getting bad smells and feeling sick,

In addition

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this

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, scraps are scattered on the street

due to

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this

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reason.

This

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causes wild animals to move around,

such

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as squirrels, Rats and reptiles. As per my suggestion, to avoid

this

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dilemma permanently, we can hire a private company and fix the specified timings for collection

the

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of the

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rubbish and garbage even, My neighbours and I are ready to pay the money for all

expenditure

Fix the agreement mistake

expenditures

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Correct article usage

a montly

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montly

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monthly

basis

therefore

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, It's possible for us to get rid of

this

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situation. Kindly find my contact details for

further

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communication.

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greeting and closing

The letter lacks a formal greeting and appropriate closing which are essential for a letter's structure. Consider using phrases such as 'Dear Sir/Madam,' to open and 'Yours faithfully,' or 'Yours sincerely,' to close.

logical structure

The letter could benefit from improved clarity and organization of ideas. Ensure each paragraph contains a single, clear idea and that the ideas flow logically from one to the next.

complete response

While the letter addresses the three bullet points, there is room to expand on each point, particularly the explanation of how this is affecting individuals, which will lead to a higher achievement score.

suitable writing tone

For a more suitable writing tone, maintain formality throughout the letter. Avoid overly casual language or contractions and ensure full sentences are utilized without errors.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

170 words

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Nowadays some professions such as doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think should offer higher salaries.

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