the system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. this is causing problems for you and your neighbours. write a letter to the local rubbish collection system is not working properly. write a letter to the local council. in your letter describe how the ruubish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours suugest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
This
letter is pertaining to the rubbish collection problem which is not happening properly at our place and due to
this
problem me and my neighbours are suffering a lot.
Firstly
, I would like to inform you that garbage collection is not working as per schedule in my area. Furthermore
, the concerned team member is not properly collecting the garbage.
Secondly
, due to
this
issue my family members and neighbours are getting bad smells and feeling sick, In addition
to this
, scraps are scattered on the street due to
this
reason. This
causes wild animals to move around, such
as squirrels, Rats and reptiles.
As per my suggestion, to avoid this
dilemma permanently, we can hire a private company and fix the specified timings for collection the
rubbish and garbage even, My neighbours and I are ready to pay the money for all Change preposition
of the
expenditure
on Fix the agreement mistake
expenditures
Correct article usage
a montly
montly
basis Correct your spelling
monthly
therefore
, It's possible for us to get rid of this
situation.
Kindly find my contact details for further
communication.Submitted by preetiaug25 on
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greeting and closing
The letter lacks a formal greeting and appropriate closing which are essential for a letter's structure. Consider using phrases such as 'Dear Sir/Madam,' to open and 'Yours faithfully,' or 'Yours sincerely,' to close.
logical structure
The letter could benefit from improved clarity and organization of ideas. Ensure each paragraph contains a single, clear idea and that the ideas flow logically from one to the next.
complete response
While the letter addresses the three bullet points, there is room to expand on each point, particularly the explanation of how this is affecting individuals, which will lead to a higher achievement score.
suitable writing tone
For a more suitable writing tone, maintain formality throughout the letter. Avoid overly casual language or contractions and ensure full sentences are utilized without errors.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,