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the most common solutions for criminal behaviour is prison but many believe education is better option. to what extent do you agree or disagree_

#behaviour #prison #education #option #disagree_
This
 is an image of a man who is standing beside the road. He is hitchhiking, showing his thumbs to the road to grab
driver’s
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the driver’s
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 attention. In the background there are many trees, it must be in the middle of the woods
This
 is a photograph of a young beautiful woman. She is in the middle of singing something with a
gray
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grey
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 microphone right in front of her. In the
background
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background,
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 there is just a plain black curtain. She must have a beautiful voice
This
 is a photograph of a woman in front of a beautiful mansion. She is painting a picture referring to what is in front of her. She paints beautifully, she must be a
well known
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well-known
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 artist
This
 is a photograph of
a
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the
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 sky. The sky looks so dark and there are lots of thunders and
lightnings
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lightning
flashes of lightning
bolts of lightning
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. It must be
heavy
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heavily
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 raining out there, it
also
 shows the rain pours in the middle of the city,
hopes
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hope
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 everyone's save
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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