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The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county.

The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county.
#line #population #oregon #county
The
lines
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 graph gives information about the
number
 of
population
 in Oregon
according
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 its regions.
Overall
, it was noticeable that
population
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the population
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 increased gradually and there was a significant
increament
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increase
 between 1970 and 2000.
Columbia
 and
Yamhil
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Yamhill
 have
similar
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a similar
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pattern
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patterns
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 of
number
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a number
the number
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 of
population
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populations
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. Both of them began at
similar
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 position, namely about 30.000 in 1940.
Then
, the
number
 of society in
Columbia
 rose steadily in 1970. It
also
 happens to Yamhil, the
amount
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 of local
people
 increased gradually in 1970 with
same
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number
 as
Columbia
 did.
Next,
There was a dramatic growth
of
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in
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population
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the population
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 of
Columbia
 and
Yamhil
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Yamhill
 in 2000
at
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from
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 75.000 to 90.000.
In addition
, Washington stood at 75.000
people
 in 1940.
Then
, there was a gradual rise of
number
 Washington Society
become
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 120.000
people
 in 1970. Afterwards, the amount of
population
 in Washington
jump
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jumped
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 dramatically in 2000
at
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to
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 240.000
people
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, population, columbia, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • Population
  • state of Oregon
  • county
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • significant changes
  • patterns
  • population growth
  • populous
  • population decline
  • steady population growth
  • less populous
  • summarize
  • prediction
  • suggestion
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