The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county.

The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county.
The
lines
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graph gives information about the
number
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of
population
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in Oregon
according
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its regions.
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, it was noticeable that
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population
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the population
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increased gradually and there was a significant
increament
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increase
between 1970 and 2000.
Columbia
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and
Yamhil
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Yamhill
have
similar
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a similar
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pattern
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of
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number
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a number
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of
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population
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populations
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. Both of them began at
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position, namely about 30.000 in 1940.
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, the
number
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of society in
Columbia
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rose steadily in 1970. It
also
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happens to Yamhil, the
amount
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of local
people
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increased gradually in 1970 with
same
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number
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as
Columbia
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did.
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There was a dramatic growth
of
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population
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the population
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of
Columbia
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and
Yamhil
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Yamhill
in 2000
at
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from
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75.000 to 90.000.
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, Washington stood at 75.000
people
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in 1940.
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, there was a gradual rise of
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Washington Society
become
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120.000
people
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in 1970. Afterwards, the amount of
population
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in Washington
jump
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dramatically in 2000
at
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to
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240.000
people
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, population, columbia, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • Population
  • state of Oregon
  • county
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • significant changes
  • patterns
  • population growth
  • populous
  • population decline
  • steady population growth
  • less populous
  • summarize
  • prediction
  • suggestion
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