You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table demonstrates the activities performed by adults who
do
not work in the United Kingdom during the previous year. It illustrates the percentages of both genders; males and females over two time blocks; in the morning and in the afternoon.
Wrong verb form
did
Overall
, the majority of women did housework throughout the day, meanwhile, most Linking Words
men
dedicated their day to job hunting. Notably, both genders spent the least amount of their time drinking.
Records show that 21% of females remained Use synonyms
pursuing
their housework after 12 pm, but 14% of males would watch television during the same Change the verb form
to pursue
timing
. Shopping is the second most favourable choice in the morning for girls and boys, at 29% and 25% respectively, Replace the word
time
however
, Linking Words
this
proportion Linking Words
is
decreased to 9% of Unnecessary verb
apply
men
and 17% of women in the afternoon.
The number of Use synonyms
men
who played sports stayed fixed over the day at 4%, Use synonyms
in contrast
, Linking Words
thos
Correct your spelling
those
choice
changed from 1% to 0% among women. Before 12 pm, staying in bed alongside sitting around had equal scores in both groups at 8% and 3% respectively, Fix the agreement mistake
choices
while
these rates drastically declined after 12 pm, when none of the females and only 1% of Linking Words
men
would stay in bed.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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