The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event.   

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graph illustrates the
proportion
of
money
collected by six grades of King Primary School during their
last
charity event.
Overall
, the highest amount of donation raised by the 1st
grade
while
the lowest
proportion
of
money
collected was belong to the 3rd
grade
. The
proportion
of
money
donated from the 1st
grade
was nearly a quarter during the recent fundraising event of King Primary School. The second-highest group was the 2nd
grade
with almost 21%
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followed by the class of 5th
grade
with just under a fifth. The remaining grades demonstrated slightly lower donation ratios,
however
, the
proportion
of
donation
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from the 3rd
grade
was the lowest with 7.8%. The 5th
grade
and the 4th
grade
contributed just above 18% and just under 14% of the total
money
collected during the event respectively.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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