The chart bellow shows the different level of post-school qualifications in Australia and proportion of men and women who held them in 1999

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bar chart illustrates the percentages of post-school qualifications based on the genders in Australia in 1999.

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females exceeded the males in the categories of undergraduate

diploma

and bachelor’s degree,

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the

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remaining

categories the proportions of men

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percentages of females and males were similar, the

rate

of females was higher

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males at 50% and nearly 45%, respectively. In terms of the field of undergraduate

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,

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rate

was higher than men’s, but the

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gap

between the genders was more significant, the

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almost doubled the

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rate

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skilled vocational

diploma

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saw a remarkable gap between

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genders, the

rate

of

male

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was higher nine times than

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rate

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postgraduate

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, men got

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degree two times more than

women

, they represented

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70% and 30%, respectively.

Finally

, the pattern for

masters

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degree

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was similar,

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, the

rate

of men was higher than

women

, which accounted for 40 %, it was less

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doubled the percentage of

women