Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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of some countries for avoiding

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dangerous

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and others believing

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considered a right to practise all types of

sports

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for the limitation of risky activities.

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injury

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could feel forced

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dangerous

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of violence which not

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conducted in 2020

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a great person in the world

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because you

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yourself to get out of your mind by

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something unusual .

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to be found

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everywhere,

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and comfortable. In conclusion,

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the desire of

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to

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avoid

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some activities which lead to

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life. It is

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first

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of

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for reassurance.