IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of visitors who visited four attractive places in Brighton, England between 1980-2010.

Overall

, both pavilion and art gallery popularity rose sharply at the beginning of the period, but it experienced a downward trend until the end of the period. The pier made up an upward trend

while

the festival made a nearly constant amount of visitors with few fluctuations. In 1980, the highest amount of tourists travelling to the festivals was around 30% ,and

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next 15

years

gradually declined the rate to 25%.

However

, after 1995, festivals acquired more than 1% of people to their records and it remained constant until the end at about 26%. In 1980, the pier was not popular and it selected around 10% of travelers. Next 5

years

it rose the amount to about 15% and had some fluctuations.

Furthermore

, after the year 2000 hit the peak point of its visitors around 22%. The pavilion

initially

had dramatically surged from about 22% to 48% within 15

years

as the most favourite place in the Brighton attractions. But, it plummeted to about 35% within the next 5

years

,

also

then

experienced a downward trend to hit the lowest of about 30%. In the year 1995, the art gallery's travellers were about 22% and it rose significantly to around 38% in 2000.

Then

presented dramatically declined to about 20%.

Moreover

, until 2010 its popularity was gradually declined to 8% and recorded as the lowest popular place.