The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The map below gives information about changes
of
a public library between 20 years ago and now.
Change preposition
in
Overall
,there were four rooms in the corners and it is clear that
there were significant changes in the types of rooms, and the tables and chairs disappeared totally.
There were some noticeable changes in the applications of the rooms. For instance
, children's books fiction has been replaced with a lecture room also
a cafe which is on the right side of the entrance has been built instead
of an enquiry desk .Moreover
,a new children's fiction has been relocated to the northwest of the entrance door and a new computer room is placed in the southwest.
On the other hand
, the middle has been developed in terms of appearance.There were tables and chairs in the middle of the library however
, in the modern design, they are removed and instead
,three self-service machines with an information desk are added.In addition
,the adult fiction books that were on the left side have been demolished and today it is a place for reference books.Submitted by mohammad.bameri.1380 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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