The charts below show the percentage of students joining North West University.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
students
that are joining North West
University and the percentages of Add a hyphen
North-West
ethnicity
of art Add an article
the ethnicity
students
in the university. Overall
, the most significant proportion is belonging
the faculty of Wrong verb form
belongs to
arts
while
the lowest is calculated for medicine. The vast majority of foreign students
who are joining arts
is
from South America.
The majority of Correct subject-verb agreement
are
students
who are joining North West University is
attending Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Arts
, Computing and Science, with 23%, 22% and 21% of the total students
respectively. The proportion of Business is almost 15% while
the ratio of Engineering is nearly a tenth. The remaining two programs, Medicine and Law, are
only Unnecessary verb
apply
accounted
for minor fractions.
There are five different Wrong verb form
account
ethnicity
for foreign Change to a plural noun
ethnicities
Arts
students
and the most dominant one is South Americans with just under 80%. It is followed by Europeans with just over a fifth, however
, the remaining nationalities, Asians, Africans, Australians
Correct word choice
and Australians
are varying
between 2 and 6 Wrong verb form
vary
percents
.Fix the agreement mistake
percent
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