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Task Achievement
For Task Achievement, ensure that both views are discussed comprehensively and balance is maintained in the discussion. Your opinion should be clear and well-developed, but the overall essay should not be biased towards one view without considering the other adequately.
Coherence and Cohesion
For Coherence and Cohesion, structure your essay with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Use cohesive devices effectively to link ideas and paragraphs. Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and that the overall essay flows logically.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite