The bar chart below shows the number of overseas students enrolled in a second year Graphic Design course at a college in the south of England. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
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The line chart illustrates the reported amount of abroad
students
entering the second-year graphic design course at one of the colleges in the south of England. The bar chart describes the number of enrolled students
from five different countries.
There are two different colours of bars indicating the different categories. Blue indicates a student who takes the photography core option major and orange represents students
enrolled in the CAD core option, CAD itself means Computer-Aided-Design. The graphic also
divides the data into two categories based on gender.
According from
the graphic, we can conclude that Sweden has the most Change preposition
to
students
enrolled to
the colleges compared to the rest country mentioned in the data, Change preposition
on
meanwhile
Syria Add a comma
meanwhile,
is has
the least enrolled Change the verb form
has
student
from the shown-information. Fix the agreement mistake
students
Nevertheless
, Syria has the most female students
enrolled in CAD core options. On the other hand
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