The bar chart below shows the number of overseas students enrolled in a second year Graphic Design course at a college in the south of England. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.

The bar chart below shows the number of overseas students enrolled in a second year Graphic Design course at a college in the south of England.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
The line chart illustrates the reported amount of abroad
students
entering the second-year graphic design course at one of the colleges in the south of England. The bar chart describes the number of enrolled
students
from five different countries. There are two different colours of bars indicating the different categories. Blue indicates a student who takes the photography core option major and orange represents
students
enrolled in the CAD core option, CAD itself means Computer-Aided-Design. The graphic
also
divides the data into two categories based on gender. According
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the graphic, we can conclude that Sweden has the most
students
enrolled
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the colleges compared to the rest country mentioned in the data,
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Syria
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the least enrolled
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from the shown-information.
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, Syria has the most female
students
enrolled in CAD core options.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • overseas students
  • enrolled
  • Graphic Design course
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • steady increase/decrease
  • significant
  • minor changes
  • enrollment
  • popular
  • diverse nationalities
  • academic year
  • compared to
  • dominate
  • in contrast
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • visual representation
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