The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions

The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions
The following table
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the
number
of
viewers
of
sports
on television by nation, units are measured in millions. There are four nations in total, including Australia, The United Kingdom, The United States, and Canada. The
sports
programs
for comparison are tennis,
golf
, motor racing, and athletics.
Overall
, Tennis is the most watched show, closely followed by
golf
. Canada has the fewest
sports
viewers
,
while
America has the most by far. The
number
of tennis watchers in the four countries is very well distributed. Approximately 7
million
views in The United States
overall
,
while
the other three countries have roughly the same
number
at 6
million
.
Golf
programs
receive only 2.8
million
views, making them the least popular shows in the country with only 13% of total
viewers
.
In contrast
,
viewers
in The United States watch
golf
programs
five times more, at around 11
million
.
Next,
with 1.1
million
viewers
of the motor race, Canada has the fewest
viewers
of any nation across all
sports
programming.
Similarly
, Australia has the second lowest
number
overall
and has the fewest
viewers
in athletics
programs
with 3
million
.
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