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The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions

The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions
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The following table
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displays
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 the
number
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 of
viewers
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 of
sports
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 on television by nation, units are measured in millions. There are four nations in total, including Australia, The United Kingdom, The United States, and Canada. The
sports
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programs
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 for comparison are tennis,
golf
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, motor racing, and athletics.
Overall
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, Tennis is the most watched show, closely followed by
golf
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. Canada has the fewest
sports
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viewers
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,
while
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 America has the most by far. The
number
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 of tennis watchers in the four countries is very well distributed. Approximately 7
million
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 views in The United States
overall
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,
while
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 the other three countries have roughly the same
number
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 at 6
million
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.
Golf
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programs
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 receive only 2.8
million
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 views, making them the least popular shows in the country with only 13% of total
viewers
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.
In contrast
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,
viewers
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 in The United States watch
golf
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programs
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 five times more, at around 11
million
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.
Next,
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with 1.1
million
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viewers
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 of the motor race, Canada has the fewest
viewers
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 of any nation across all
sports
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 programming.
Similarly
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, Australia has the second lowest
number
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overall
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 and has the fewest
viewers
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 in athletics
programs
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 with 3
million
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, viewers, sports, programs, golf, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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