The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many
books
were read by males and females at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014.
In general, there are two lines, mentioning two types of gender, where the first one represents the highest quantity of books
, and the second one has some fluctuations expressing both upward and downward trends.
Turning to the specifics, in the beginning
both lines had different numbers of Add the comma(s)
beginning,
books
that were read by men and women. The female category
started from just above 4000 books
in 2011, while
the opposite category
began from approximately 2000 books
. Starting from the initial quantity the first category
went on increasing up
to almost 10000 Wrong verb form
to increase
books
from 2011 to 2013, following
Wrong verb form
followed
with
Change preposition
by
decrease
to 7000 items in 2014.
In the Correct article usage
a decrease
meantime
the male Add a comma
meantime,
category
reflected the steady growth from 2000 to 3000 books
between 2011 and 2012, but after 2012 it had a sharp increase to about 10000 books
, continuing to grow up to 13000 items in 2014.Submitted by zavkidm on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, category with synonyms.
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