The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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of individuals Change the article
a number
the number
fallowing
the news on 4 different Correct your spelling
following
media
in a particular area. In brief, television was one of the most popular media
all
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of all
over
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the
time. But Correct article usage
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in contrast
, the popularity between
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of
other
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the other
media
was variable.
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periods
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similarity, a significant increase in number
of people who Change the article
a number
the number
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prefer
internet
should be mentioned as well. Add an article
the internet
this
media
only had 30% Change preposition
of user
user
in 2013 and approached 40% Fix the agreement mistake
users
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of customer
customer
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customers
next
2 years, Correct article usage
the next
however
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a dramatic
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of user
user
.
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users
Furthermore
, another markable change in average
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the average
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percentage
user
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users
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the newspaper
a newspaper
newspaper
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newspapers
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of buyer
buyer
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buyers
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, the figure for radio was around 30% in
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