The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map below gives information about the formation of the factory site now and the
planning
development of it in the future. Replace the word
planned
Overall
, the picture shows that the plan will be accommodated housing area
for the employee of the industry.
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
Firstly
, the details of the map illustrates
that now the industrial place is built Change the verb form
illustrate
in
the side of roads which has a circular road Change preposition
on
connected
the outside and inside of the Wrong verb form
connecting
area
. Additionally
, in the north of the building estate is the farmland that Add a missing verb
is seperated
seperated
from the location by the river.
Correct your spelling
separated
Secondly
, the planned realocation
for Correct your spelling
relocation
reallocation
this
site visualizes that the factory buildings will be replaced with the employe's houses. Not only that, the public area
will be built such
as a school, playground, shops, and a medical centre. Moreover
, the location will have new roads that access housing
side near the town and Correct article usage
the housing
accross
the river. Correct your spelling
across
As a result
, the area
will be bigger than now but the farmland will be smaller.Submitted by dyahkusumaningrum18 on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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