The bar chart below provides information about the top ten rice producing countries in the world in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below provides information about the top ten rice producing countries in the world in 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the ranking of
countries
based on their rice production in 2015. The numerical values correspond to metric tonnes. In general,
it is clear that
China was the primary rice provider,
while
Japan had the lowest proportion as a supplier. There were two
countries
that vastly produced rice in 2015.
First,
China with 144,560, followed by India with 104,800. After that, the third and fourth
countries
had a very huge gap with the former. There was Indonesia, which produced nearly one-third of India, and Bangladesh, just slightly below Indonesia, which was 34,500.
Next,
still in the ASEAN
countries
, was Vietnam with 28,234,
while
Thailand had 10,000 tons under Vietnam.
Then
, the numbers dropped for the following
countries
: Burma with 12,600 and the Philippines with 11,915.
Lastly
, Japan and Brazil had small figures with accumulated numbers of approximately 15,000 with Japan as the lowest.
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