The bar chart gives infornamtion about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

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bar chart illustrates the average number of journeys which residents and non-residents did per day into the

city

centre

from 1996 to 2005. It is clearly evident that the residents commute to the

city

centre

by far more than non-residents with approximately 10,000 in 1996.

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number in spite of some fluctuations decreased slightly to about 9300 in 1999.

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, non-citizens travel was 5000 in the starting point

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but experienced a considerable increase to more than 8000 after three years. Regarding the introduction of parking meters into

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centre

in 2000, the proportion of citizens who travel fell dramatically to 5000 and

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number stayed stable until the next two years.

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, parking meters did not have any influence on non-citizens and their figure stayed unchanged until 2002. What's more, closing

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Westgate Street and Park Lane

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the traffic influenced hugely on both groups.

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that residents went to the

city

centre

4000 times until 2005, and

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for strangers, too with merely 3000 in 2004.

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, their figure grew again to under 5000 in 2005. In sum, it is crystal clear that

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mentioned factors which were parking meters and closing some streets had a pivotal role in reducing

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of both groups of people.