The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map below shows the visualization of the city at present and how it will look in the future development.
Overall
, there will be an industrial estate and some modifications of roads in the proposed plan that make the town centre more accessible. The detailed looks of the map give information that the
air field
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airfield
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will be demolished as an
indutrial
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industrial
place connecting to the railway. Today, it is only A2 street that has a roundabout, but in the
future
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there will be A4 as a new road that can access the rail tracks and the town
center
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from the west side of the town. The size of
city
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the city
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centre is
same
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the same
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as before, but it will connect with the A4 street.
Moreover
, the building will have
an
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access to the big road on the east side and a big new roundabout on the northwest.
Consequently
, the build-up site ring road will be smaller.
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