The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts
that
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how
plastic
bottles
are recycled.
Overall
,It is explicit that
process
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the process
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of recycling
plastic
bottles
is consist
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of nine different stages.
This
process
starts
from
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with
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bottles
in dustbins to producing end products,which are useful. In detail,In the first step,
plastic
bottles
are thrown into the bins.In the second phase,recycling trucks collect these
bottles
from bins and take them to the recycling centre.In
this
centre,
plastic
bottles
are sorted by
human
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humans
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.In the next stage,sorted
bottles
are compressed tightly with the help of the
machine
.
Further
,
crushing
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the crushing
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machine
crushes the compressed
bottles
.
Then
,water is
use
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used
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to wash
this
material.After that
process
,crushed material is poured into the
machine
and
plastic
pellets are produced with the help of
pelleting
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a pelleting
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machine
. Regarding the remaining
process
of
recycle
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recycling
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,pellets are heated to form raw material,once raw material is produced,it
stored
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is stored
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into
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in
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piles.In the
last
step of the
process
,end items are produced from the raw material.These products are
bottles
,shirts,pencils and lunch boxes for children.
Then
again
bottles
are used and recycled.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, process, machine with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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