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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts
that
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apply
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how
plastic
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bottles
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 are recycled.
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,It is explicit that
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process
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the process
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 of recycling
plastic
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bottles
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is consist
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consists
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 of nine different stages.
This
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process
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 starts
from
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with
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bottles
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 in dustbins to producing end products,which are useful. In detail,In the first step,
plastic
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bottles
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 are thrown into the bins.In the second phase,recycling trucks collect these
bottles
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 from bins and take them to the recycling centre.In
this
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 centre,
plastic
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bottles
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 are sorted by
human
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humans
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.In the next stage,sorted
bottles
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 are compressed tightly with the help of the
machine
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.
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,
crushing
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the crushing
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machine
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 crushes the compressed
bottles
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.
Then
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,water is
use
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used
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 to wash
this
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 material.After that
process
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,crushed material is poured into the
machine
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 and
plastic
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 pellets are produced with the help of
pelleting
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a pelleting
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machine
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. Regarding the remaining
process
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 of
recycle
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recycling
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,pellets are heated to form raw material,once raw material is produced,it
stored
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is stored
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into
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in
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 piles.In the
last
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 step of the
process
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,end items are produced from the raw material.These products are
bottles
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,shirts,pencils and lunch boxes for children.
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 again
bottles
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 are used and recycled.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, process, machine with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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