The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of several
export
commodities in a country between 2015 and 2016. Overall
, the export
values in all categories increased in 2016 compared to 2015 except for gems and jewellery which declined slightly in 2016.
The petroleum products export
amount went up approximately 2 billion
dollars
in 2016 to 63 billion
dollars
after their last
trade in 2015 which is 61 billion
dollars
. The enginereed products transaction value started at 57 billion
dollars
in 2015, then
, it surged to 62 billion
in 2016. The textile commodity trade amount also
increased significantly in 2016 and reached 32 billion
dollars
compared to its prior year value which marks only 25 billion
dollars
. The agriculture products category increased a little bit around 1 billion
dollars
in 2016.
On the other hand
, gems and jewellery commodity value in export
dropped from 43 billion
dollars
in 2015 to 41 billion
dollars
in 2016.Submitted by hilmi.santiago.alif on
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