The diagrams below show the changes of a town called Bridgetown 1700 and 2000. Compare and summarize the changes of the Bridgetown.

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the visual differences of Bridgetown city in 1700 and 300 years later.

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, some development happened in the town

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for public

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facilities

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as roads, railway,

school

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, and built-up

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. The detailed looks of the diagrams show that the main

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of

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the area were the replacement of the castle with the school and the development of rail tracks across the site which made the site

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be accessed by train.

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, the

market places

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were bigger than before. As an impact of the refurbishment, the forest was not as

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as the previous. The street in 2000 had a subsidiary which would be two on the river where it just only had a trestle in 1700.

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, it enlarged where had the possibility to accommodate more vehicles. The south side of the town in 2000 was focused as

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a built-up

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area where it was

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farmland in the 1700s.