The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps below illustrate the way to the city hospital by the town
road
in 2007 and in the
three years later.
Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, in 2010, more public facilities developed
to connect the hospital, Add a missing verb
were developed
such
as bus
station, public car park, and Correct article usage
a bus
two
roundabouts.
The detailed looks of the diagrams reflect that the city hospital was surrounded by the ring road
. In 2007, there was only a car park for staff and public. But, in 2010, it was enlarged. So that
, the place has Correct determiner usage
apply
two
parking area
; Fix the agreement mistake
areas
in
the east side of the building was for the public and the previous one was only for the employees. Change preposition
on
Two
roundabouts were built to connect the road
with the bus
station where
Correct word choice
which
it
was just Correct pronoun usage
apply
bus
stops before. The bus
station was constructed in
the right side of the hospital Change preposition
on
road
which had two
gates; one to the hospital, and the other one to the main street.Submitted by dyahkusumaningrum18 on
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