In my
I think every
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is important for us. We have to learn everything through our past, present and
future
. some
people
say that
History
is one of the most important School subjects it's true but it has to go
along with
today's world which is
science
and
technology
. How can we move without our
history
, the
people
behind us ''The ancient
people
''
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the most powerful
people
who
pushesChange the verb form
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us to move forward.
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taught us how to fire a light, how to find
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, how to
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with other
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animals, how to survive and others. Of
we wouldn’t know that without them.
Science
and
technology
are important too. They give us a chance to move forward with them. without
science
and
we are just normal human
beingFix the agreement mistake
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. we spend our daily life with no useful. Without them we have no light we have no food, we have no comfortable stuff and things.
old
people
can
survivedChange the verb form
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without these things. Human creates lots of
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to give
an unlimited wantsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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ofChange preposition
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people
based on a limited government.
May I
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one example of the development of
Science
and
Technology
. With
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two things it
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us a chance to be a member of
ASEANCorrect article usage
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'' Association of South East Asia
NationFix the agreement mistake
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'' we can be able to communicate with other 9 countries with
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high
technology
. It
helpChange the verb form
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us to be a TEAMWORK with the 9 other countries to develop our country
helpCorrect word choice
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us in terms of transportation, communication, collaboration etc. It can definitely hold on to that hope
that Correct word choice
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in the near
future
.
Overall
economics can totally
achievesCorrect subject-verb agreement
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. it is a fact that the member of the member of the ASEAN have differences in
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of political standing, culture and traditions but it's not a problem with our help I know that there's a bright
future
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waiting for all of us.and
that is
a reason why
history
,
science
and
Technology
is important.
We use
History
to learn about others, their culture,
theirCorrect word choice
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tradition to
be understandChange the verb form
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each other more and more and
usingWrong verb form
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Science
and
technology
to help us, our country,
ourCorrect word choice
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world to be moving forward, to help each other and to give a bright
chancesCorrect the article-noun agreement
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and
future
for everyone, especially kids give a
chancesCorrect the article-noun agreement
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to them to study, to go to school, to get knowledge so the next ten years, twenty years to the new up Coming year all of them can help each other to pass these chances to other kids go on and on.