The bar chart shows the number of overseas students enrolled in a third year Computer Science course at a Canadian college. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the bar chart provided reveals some information about
gender
distribution of attendees from five different countries, namely Singapore, Malaysia, China, Correct article usage
the gender
Sri
Lanka
, and France in a computer science course with two options include
networking Wrong verb form
including
core
and database core
.
Overall
, it is clear that
China has the most enrollments in both genders, in inverse proportion, France has the least of those.
While
Chinese women mostly prefer networking
Correct article usage
the networking
core
option, all three French women enrolled in database
Correct article usage
the database
core
option. Total
Change the article
A total
The total
number
of male students
from China who registered for networking
and database Correct article usage
the networking
core
option is eight with the
proportion of one to seven, respectively. Just two men from France chose to study abroad and Correct article usage
a
number
of them in these two fields Change the article
a number
the number
are
the same.
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Sri
Lanka
and Singapore have striking similarities in number
of attendees. Total
Change the article
A total
The total
number
of students
from Sri
Lanka
is 12, very much the same as that of for
Singapore. The Change preposition
apply
number
of male students
in Sri
Lanka
are
twice as many as female Change the verb form
is
students
. The number
female
Change preposition
of female
students
from Malaysia is greater than that of for
male Change preposition
apply
students
with the
proportion of seven to four.Correct article usage
a
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