The maps depict current structures of Islip town center and future look after planned developments are applied.
These
two
plans describe the re-building of the area of the Islip Use synonyms
town
centre in the future years.
In the first plan, we can see the current Use synonyms
town
centre which is relatively modest. There are Use synonyms
two
housing locations, between a park and a school. We can Use synonyms
also
observe Linking Words
two
lines of shops on the opposite side of Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the housings
housings
. These Fix the agreement mistake
housing
two
lines of shops are separated by the main road.
Use synonyms
However
, the plans for the reconstruction of Linking Words
this
place are quite generous. We can expect the new shopping centre with a car park and a bus station in the north of Linking Words
this
part of the Linking Words
town
. There are Use synonyms
way
for pedestrians only , and more new houses for living. The most significant change of Fix the agreement mistake
ways
this
place is the dual carriageway which surrounds Linking Words
all
Correct determiner usage
apply
this
place.
Linking Words
To sum up
, the re-building plans are Linking Words
innovating
, and make Replace the word
innovative
this
part of the Linking Words
town
better accessible and more convenient for their inhabitants.Use synonyms
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