The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate the

planed

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planned

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future

expantion

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expansion

Southside

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the Southside

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shopping mall and

it's

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its

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current

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the current

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situation.

Overall

it is clear that

the

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future

futer

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future

plan will expand the car park,

while

recerving

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reserving

receiving

preserving

more space for

it's

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its

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fashion related

stores

. Currently,

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apply

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the

center

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of the Southside shopping mall

oly

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only

contain a cafe, a play area, a Noodle shop, a

suprmarket

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supermarket

, a toilet and a department store.

As well as

there is a fitness

center

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centre

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South

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the South

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side

of the map. The entire East

side

of the shopping

center

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centre

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has

used

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to entertain with

with

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the help of its Golf club and the park.

According to

the

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proposal

proporsal

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proposal

, the golf course and the park will be demolished and the department store will move towards the east

side

Moreovr

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Moreover

, the whole North

side

of the shopping mall

wll

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will

be full fill

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with

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fashion and

beauty related

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beauty-related

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stores

such

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apply

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beauty

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a beauty

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salon, two shoe

stores

and

cosmetics

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a cosmetics

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shop.

Likewise

, there will be

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infor

center

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centre

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and more fashion

stores

on the west

side

and the North

side

of the

center

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, respectively.

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Linking words
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3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Money offered for post graduate research is limited; as a consequence, some people argue that financial support from the government should only provide for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. Do you agree or disagree?

What can we learn from the boys' experience about the nature of power and leadership?

Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.