The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meats in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The chart illustrates the
consumption
of different kinds of meats Use synonyms
such
as chicken, beef, lamb, and Linking Words
fish
in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Use synonyms
Overall
, beef was the highest Linking Words
number
in the beginning, Use synonyms
while
the smallest Linking Words
number
could be looked at Use synonyms
fish
. Other meats showed different kinds of movement.
Beef has 220 Use synonyms
grains
per person per week which is the biggest, which Use synonyms
then
, dropped Linking Words
for
less than 200 Change preposition
to
grains
. After that, it kept decreasing until it touched Use synonyms
Use synonyms
number
around 100. The Correct article usage
a number
consumption
of chicken showed Use synonyms
sharply
changes from 148 Change the word
sharp
grains
per person per week to a Use synonyms
number
Use synonyms
around
250 Change preposition
of around
grains
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in 1979,Linking Words
a
Correct article usage
the
consumption
of chicken was similar to lamb which was more than 140 Use synonyms
grains
. Use synonyms
However
, lamb Linking Words
Use synonyms
consumption's
was rapidly decreasing to nearly in the same numbers of Change noun form
consumption
fish
(about 50 Use synonyms
grains
).
Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
a
Change the article
the
number
of Use synonyms
fish
was slowly decreasing Use synonyms
for
less than 50 Change preposition
to
grains
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
in
each year, it showed a little bit of Change preposition
apply
increasing
.Replace the word
increase
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, number, grains with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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