The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meats in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The chart illustrates the
consumption
of different kinds of meats such
as chicken, beef, lamb, and fish
in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, beef was the highest number
in the beginning, while
the smallest number
could be looked at fish
. Other meats showed different kinds of movement.
Beef has 220 grains
per person per week which is the biggest, which then
, dropped for
less than 200 Change preposition
to
grains
. After that, it kept decreasing until it touched number
around 100. The Correct article usage
a number
consumption
of chicken showed sharply
changes from 148 Change the word
sharp
grains
per person per week to a number
around
250 Change preposition
of around
grains
. Moreover
, in 1979, a
Correct article usage
the
consumption
of chicken was similar to lamb which was more than 140 grains
. However
, lamb consumption's
was rapidly decreasing to nearly in the same numbers of Change noun form
consumption
fish
(about 50 grains
).
In addition
, a
Change the article
the
number
of fish
was slowly decreasing for
less than 50 Change preposition
to
grains
. Furthermore
, in
each year, it showed a little bit of Change preposition
apply
increasing
.Replace the word
increase
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