The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows how five European states manage their household income on diets, housing, clothing, and entertainment.
Overall
, housing has become the first priority of France, Germany, and the UK when spending their monthly household income.
However
, in Turkey and Spain, food and drink dominate the percentages.
Furthermore
, the garment has become the least thing to spend in four out of five countries. The highest spending on housing comes from the UK by 37%,
then
Germany by 33%, and France by 31%. These three countries
also
have the same similarity to other spending with priorities from food and drink, entertainment, and clothing. As the least preferred, clothing expenditure is only 11% for UK citizens 15% for Germans, and 7% for the French.
On the contrary
, for Turkey and Spain, the proportion of dietary is the highest with respectively 36% and 31%, making housing their second biggest expense.
Although
clothing still became the lowest expenditure for Spanish with 8%, it is different for Turkish. In Turkey, entertainment constitutes 10% of the total percentage, making it the lowest-spending category.
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