The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. summarize and report information about main features
The maps show how a science
park
has developed over the last
fifteen years.
Overall
, there have been several changes, the most noticeable being the increases in science
building, and Add an article
the science
elimination
of the Correct article usage
the elimination
park
. In addition
, being more accessible by stations and cycle path
.
In 2008, the railway crossed the south side of the science Fix the agreement mistake
paths
park
and next to it, there was woodland which stretched from the south to north in
the west side. IT Change preposition
on
center
was surrounded by Change the spelling
centre
railway
, woodland, and Correct article usage
a railway
car
Correct article usage
a car
park
. business units were located on the opposite side of IT
Correct article usage
the IT
center
, and it got in touch with Change the spelling
centre
car
Correct article usage
the car
park
and cyber security by path
. Woodland, Add an article
the path
a path
grass land
, and offices were along horizontal Correct your spelling
grassland
line
in the south. It was noted that the reception building was exactly in front of the offices.
Turning to the present-day map, it can be seen that the grassland has gone , and Fix the agreement mistake
lines
being
replaced by research and development Add a missing verb
is being
building
. The offices remain the same, as do the trees. Reception has been converted to the university hub. Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
In addition
, path
have been constructed between the university and the Correct article usage
a path
car
park
and also
the cycle path
has been built along the road. In terms of accessibility to transportation
system, the bus stop and train station are built. It is evident that changes in size have been performed, too. the Add an article
the transportation
car
park
and cyber security have been contracted and expanded, respectively.Submitted by TUTOO on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, path, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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