The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph gives information on the goods and
services
that were exported from Scotland to the
UK
and the globe in 2014 In detail, the amount of various equipment and
services
that are exported from Scotland to the
UK
is
overall
lower as compared to the global trade, except the Electrical & instrument Engineering has 4
billion
to the
UK
contrasted with only 2.3
billion
to the global. Concerning products and
services
sold to
ROW
reached 13.8
billion
as compared with 1.7
billion
to the
UK
, followed by the volume of turnover related to "chemicals and mineral products" in
ROW
9.5
billion
contrast with the
UK
only around 5
billion
.
Moreover
, "Agricultural, Forestry, Fishing and Mining", "other
services
" and " other manufacturing" exports to the
UK
rank lowest at 0.6, 0.9, and 1
billion
and contrasting with
ROW
have 2.4, 3, and 5.9
billion
. In terms of exported volume to the
UK
" Manufacturing of Food and Drink" is around 4.4
billion
and
ROW
is around 5.8
billion
.
on the other hand
, the amount of exported metals and transportation equipment is close, to the
UK
around 2.1
billion
, to
ROW
around 2.7
billion
.
Moreover
, "wholesale and retail" exports to the
UK
are around 1.1
billion
as compared with
ROW
of around 8.2
billion
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words services, uk, billion, row with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 7 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • exports
  • Scotland
  • rest of the UK
  • rest of the world
  • comparisons
  • total value
  • higher
  • percentage
  • steady increase
  • fluctuating trend
  • significant contribution
  • export market
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