You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You would like to rent a car for a holiday. Write to the car rental agency. In your letter •Explain what type of car you would like •Give details of when you would like the car •Request more information about the cost

#minutes #rent #car #holiday #agency #•explain #type #•give #•request #information #cost

Dear Sir, I am writing to request information about the rent a

car

for a holiday. I would like to

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want a

car

that can accommodate all family members. I think it will be a seven-seater and black in colour. I need a

car

that can handle long distances and be able to overcome bad roads as best as possible. I will pick up the

car

later

this

weekend because I have a trip planned for the weekend, it might be quite rushed, but I hope I will get the

car

I mentioned above. Please deliver the

car

to my house in the morning around 5am

this

Sunday.

Finally

, I would like to know more about the costs of the

car

I rent. Please send cost information to the phone number I sent after viewing

this

letter. Thank you in advance for your assistance with

this

matter. Yours faithfully, Le Huy Gia Hoang

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure the logical flow of ideas by better organizing the information in a more structured format with clear introductory sentences for each paragraph.

Coherence and Cohesion

Maintain a single focus for each paragraph, avoiding mixing requests and details to enhance readability.

Task Achievement

Elaborate more on the specific details of your request, such as the specific car model you require and any particular features, to fully address the task.

Task Achievement

The tone of the letter is generally suitable but aim for consistent formality throughout the letter to maintain an appropriate register.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

154 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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