The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph describes the number of retail outlets closed and opened in an unnamed region in the years 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, there was a significant fall in both closures and openings of the Linking Words
stores
from 2011 to 2018.
In 2011, many Use synonyms
shops
were opened which was approximately around 8000 and experienced a dramatic decline in 2012, with roughly around 25% of Use synonyms
stores
being constructed. It Use synonyms
then
gradually showed an upward trend with just above 6000 Linking Words
stores
developed before it went down again in 2015 to 4000 Use synonyms
shops
and remained stable until 2016. Use synonyms
In addition
, it increased very slightly just over 4000 until it dropped to 3000 in 2018, which was the least Linking Words
stores
opened in the past eight years.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the closure started with a decline from 2011 to 2012 with just below 6000 Linking Words
stores
. Use synonyms
Then
, it gradually increased to just over 7000 in 2013 before it went down to around 6500 Linking Words
shops
closed in 2014 and significantly dropped below 1000 in 2015. Use synonyms
Although
Linking Words
,
in 2016 the number of Remove the comma
apply
shops
closed showed a sudden increase to just over 5000, it went down again slightly in 2012 with 5000 Use synonyms
stores
and rose to just over 5000 by 2018.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stores, shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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