The charts below give information on the ages of the population in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections in 2050.
The data related to the age groups of the crowd in
Yemen
and Italy is demonstrated in the pie charts below, Over a 50-year span (2000-2050) comparing 2000 and foreseeable population
in 2050.
Considering Yemen
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Yemen's
Population
pattern, the highest population
proportion is related to children
and teenagers with ages between 0-14 (50%), following
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followed
adults
between 15-59 years old, respectively in both 2000 and 2050. The most population
, however
, is related to adults
in 2050 (57%). Additionally
, there will be a significant increase (11%) in the population
of adults
in 2050, while
the children
population
will experience a 13.1% decrease till 2050. And the number of elderly people seem
to change slightly with an increase of 2.1%.
Turning to the information related to Italy, the highest amount of Correct subject-verb agreement
seems
population
is the
Correct article usage
apply
adults
with 61.6% that
will decrease dramatically in 2050. Correct pronoun usage
which
On the other hand
, the number of old people would swell from 24.1 to 42.3%. It’s predicted that the population
of children
may decrease to 11.5% (from 14.3% in 2000).
Overall
, the highest proportion of population
is attributed to Add an article
the population
adults
in both countries over the span, except for Yemen
in 2000, which is the children
population
. Furthermore
, the number of children
in Yemen
is significantly more than Italy
,Change preposition
in Italy
that
clearly demonstrates that Correct pronoun usage
which
birth
rate is Correct article usage
the birth
more
in Correct word choice
higher
Yemen
while
the death rate is more
in Italy.Correct word choice
higher
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