ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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describes

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about changing numbers of people that travel abroad within 4 different years, 1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005. Based on the table, the total of people that do international

travels

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is showing an

increasing

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from 1990 to 2005. The number

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increased by around 250

million

of

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people in total. As

for

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the most popular destination was led

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Europe at the year of 1990,

then

surprisingly Europe still

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its position

through

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consecutive years up until 2005. On the other side, the least

prefered

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preferred

destination is the Middle East,

only

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by

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9.8

million

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visitors and still

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the least

prefered

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preferred

destination until the year

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2005 with 15.8

million

travellers.

Besides

, almost all of these areas are doing

a positive changes

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, with Europe as the region that has the most differences in visitors.

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, the only region that had

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fluctuative

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fluctuating

changes in the

travellers

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number of travellers

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is

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in

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America,

that

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was stably increased its travellers from 1990 until 2000

,

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but shows a

decreasing

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decrease

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by

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5

million

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visitors

at

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the year

of

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2005.