The diagram below shows the process of producing smoked fish

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The

illuatration

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illustration

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demonstrates how smoked

fish

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produced

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is produced

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, it is fourteen stages,

man made

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, linear process and it begins with catching

fish

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to smoke them and ends with displaying

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them at

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fish

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shop shelves. First of all,

fish

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catched

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caught

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by a web and

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the

catched

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caught

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fish

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is transported to port within containers. After it is first

freezed

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frozen

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and

then

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thawed before adding into fresh water. After it

exposed

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is exposed

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to fresh water, it is cut

oppened

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open

in order to prepare for

salt water

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saltwater

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and yellow colouring exposure. After cut

oppened

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opened

fish

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is added into the environment, it

smoked

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is smoked

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through heating. Following that, smoked

fish

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is canned or boxed and

freezed

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frozen

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at zero Celcius before

adding

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being added

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cold

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the cold

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store. Stored cans are distributed by tracks and they eventually

reached

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reach

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their final destination of

fish

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store shelves.

historicalpenMon Jan 01 2024

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
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detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

135 words

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