sOME PEOPLE SAY hISTORY IS ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT SCHOOL SUBJECTS. oTHERS PEOPLE THINK THAT, IN TODAY'S WORLD, SUBJECTS LIKE SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY ARE MORE IMPORTANT THAN hISTORY, Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In my

opinion

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I think every

subjects

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subject

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is important for us. We have to learn everything through our past, present and

future

. Some

people

say that

History

is one of the most important school subjects it's true but it has to go

along with

today's world which is

science

and

Technology

. How can we move without our

history

, the

people

behind us "The ancient

people

"

is

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are

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the most powerful

people

who

pushes

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us to move forward.

The

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They

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taught us how to fire a light, How to find

a food

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food

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, How to

lives

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live

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with

other

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others

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and animals, How to survive and others. Of

course

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course,

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we wouldn't know that without them.

Science

and

Technology

are important too. They give us a chance to move

torward

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forward

with them. Without

Science

and

Technology

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we're just

a

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apply

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normally

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normal

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humans

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human

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being

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beings

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. We spend our daily life with no useful. Without them we have no light we have no food, we have no comfortable stuff and things. Old

people

can

survived

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without these things. Humans

creates

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create

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lots of

invention

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inventions

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to give

an unlimited wants

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unlimited wants

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of

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to

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people

based on a limited government. May I

gives

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one example of the development of

science

and

Technology

. With

this

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these

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two things it give us a chance to be a member of ASEAN "Association of South East Asia

Nation

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" we can be able to communicate with the other 9 countries with the high

technology

it

help

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us to

be

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apply

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a

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apply

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TEAMWORK with the 9 other countries to develop our country. help us in terms of transportation, communication, collaboration etc.

it

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can definitely hold on to that hope that in the near

future

.

Overall

economics can totally

achieves

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achieve

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. it is a fact that the member of the member of the ASEAN have differences in

term

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terms

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of political standing, culture and traditions but it's not a problem with our help I know that

there're

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a bright

future

are

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waiting for all of us. and

that is

a reason why

History

.

Science

and

Technology

is important We use

History

to learn about others, their culture,

their

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and their

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tradition to

be understand

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understand

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each other more and more and

using

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use

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science

and

Technology

to help us, our country,

our

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and our

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world to be moving forward, to help each other and to give a bright

chances

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chance

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and

future

for everyone, especially kids give a

chances

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chance

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to them to study, to go to school, to get knowledge so the next ten years, twenty years to the new

up coming

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upcoming

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year all of them can help each other to pass these chances to other kids go on and on