The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The graph presents the public
library
layout
proposal from 20 years ago and how it is viewed at
this
moment.
Overall
, the
layout
remained the same except there was a decrease in a feature which is tables &
chairs
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and chairs
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, and added some area for an information
desk
and sofa.
Although
the
library
has the same
layout
,
but
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the position of each part changes. The original
layout
plan 20 years ago would directly face tables and chairs after passing the entrance. Just on the west
side
of the
Library
, there are entertainment
place
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places
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(CDs, videos, computer games) on the northwest, a reading room (newspapers &
magazines
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and magazines
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) on the southwest, and
adult
fiction
books
just in the middle of it. On the right
side
, from the south to the north, standing Children's
books
,
Adult
non-fiction
books
, and an enquiry
desk
*(tickets, book returns, etc) At
this
moment, there are no significant changes in the
layout
only the position of each facility. The tables & chairs are being removed resulting in the empty space in the middle of the
library
. On the southeast,
Cafe
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the Cafe
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changed
enquiry
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the enquiry
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desk
and on the north
side
,
Adult
fiction
books
, an information
desk
, and self-service machines were added to replace
adult
non-fiction
books
and the study room came to replace
Childern's
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children's
books
. On the west
side
, there is an added sofa in the story
evens
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events
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&
childern's
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children's
fiction
books
area.
Computer
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The computer
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room and all reference
books
also
came to the west
side
of the
library
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, layout, desk, side, adult, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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