You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter • describe the item. - Explain where and when you left it - say what action you would like the company to take - Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inquire about my
bag
which I forgot on one of your
train
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. Actually, my
bag
is of Guess brand and it is
of
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red colour with black
strips
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stripes
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. The
bag
contains my
driving
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driver's
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license,
healthcard
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health
, credit card
of
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from
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Scotia
bank
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, and cash
of
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worth 50 dollars. It
also
have
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my rare beauty foundation and lipstick in it. Let me explain my situation. I
board
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a
train
from Brantford to Toronto on Saturday evening (December 30, 2023) to visit my sister as she was in hospital giving birth to my niece. When I reached the Toronto station, I got
call
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a call
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from my
brother in law
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that they
are
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blessed with
baby
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a baby
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girl and in excitement I left the
train
and forgot to take my purse with me. It would be great if you could check with the
train
investigator
that
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whether
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they had found any
bag
from the
train
or not. If you found my
bag
, please
tell
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me know by emailing me
on
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at
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[email protected] and I will come to pick
my
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up my
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bag
from your office. If you need any additional information regarding
bag
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, please feel free to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Simranpreet Kaur Bhullar
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea with supporting details focused on the single idea.
coherence cohesion
Aim to use a variety of complex structures and ensure your sentences are clear and accurately constructed.
task achievement
Fully expand on all bullet points provided in the task, ensuring each point is thoroughly addressed to maximize task completion.
task achievement
Ensure all the information requested in the task is provided, such as a precise time when the item was lost, and provide a more specific location within the train if possible.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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