You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter • describe the item. - Explain where and when you left it - say what action you would like the company to take - Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inquire about my
bag
which I forgot on one of your train
. Actually, my Change to a plural noun
trains
bag
is of Guess brand and it is of
red colour with black Change preposition
apply
strips
. The Correct your spelling
stripes
bag
contains my driving
license, Change noun form
driver's
healthcard
, credit card Correct your spelling
health
of
Scotia Change preposition
from
bank
, and cash Capitalize word
Bank
of
worth 50 dollars. It Change preposition
apply
also
have
my rare beauty foundation and lipstick in it.
Let me explain my situation. I Change the verb form
has
board
a Wrong verb form
boarded
train
from Brantford to Toronto on Saturday evening (December 30, 2023) to visit my sister as she was in hospital giving birth to my niece. When I reached the Toronto station, I got call
from my Add an article
a call
the call
brother in law
that they Add a hyphen
brother-in-law
are
blessed with Wrong verb form
were
baby
girl and in excitement I left the Add an article
a baby
the baby
train
and forgot to take my purse with me.
It would be great if you could check with the train
investigator that
they had found any Correct word choice
whether
bag
from the train
or not. If you found my bag
, please tell
me know by emailing me Verb problem
let
on
[email protected] and I will come to pick Change preposition
at
my
Change preposition
up my
bag
from your office. If you need any additional information regarding bag
, please feel free to contact me.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Simranpreet Kaur BhullarCorrect article usage
the bag
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea with supporting details focused on the single idea.
coherence cohesion
Aim to use a variety of complex structures and ensure your sentences are clear and accurately constructed.
task achievement
Fully expand on all bullet points provided in the task, ensuring each point is thoroughly addressed to maximize task completion.
task achievement
Ensure all the information requested in the task is provided, such as a precise time when the item was lost, and provide a more specific location within the train if possible.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
