You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The double bar chart

illustrated

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the changes in average

accomomation

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accommodation

prices in

five

different

cities

between 1990-2002 and 1996-2002 year durations compared with the average house prices in 1989. The first part of

bar

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the bar

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graph mainly

provideds

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provides

provided

information about

decrease

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the decrease

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five

different

cities

during 1990-1995,

while

the second part of

bar

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the bar

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graph indicates the increase

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five

different

cities

during 1996-2002.

It is clear that

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apply

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London is expected to see the most dramatic changes in its

overge

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average

coverage

overage

house prices which

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reached well over 10 million euros, and Frankfurt shows the

decreaes

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decreases

decrease

from 3 million euros to 1 million euros. There was an

upword

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upward

trend over the period of 1990-2002 in all of the

five

cities

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

118 words

5.50

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Topic Vocabulary:

housing market
average house prices
trend analysis
price fluctuation
peak
trough
year-on-year change
appreciation and depreciation of property value
benchmark year (1989)
significant increase/decrease
inflation-adjusted prices
real estate dynamics
economic factors
buyer's/seller's market
price index

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