The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the local governmental distribution
to
different categories of Change preposition
of
expenses
in 2010 and 2015.
In general, there are two pie charts, divided in
nine various items of distributed Change the preposition
into
expenses
from the government, where four categories, namely Education, Healthcare, Pensions and Defense, have the largest proportions
, while
the last
three of
items have the least one.
Turning to the specifics, the Change preposition
apply
proportions
of the local government expenses
in 2010 were the most significant for four
types of expenditure. They were Education, Healthcare, Pensions and Defense with 24%, 21%, 19% and 17% respectively. Notably, these items of governmental funding Correct article usage
the four
stayed
the biggest ones and they had Verb problem
remained
the
similar shares in 2015 with a bit different Correct article usage
apply
proportions
, that
were 21%, 20%, 19 % and 14%.
As for the other two categories of Correct pronoun usage
which
expenses
, following after
the largest ones mentioned above in both years, Welfare and Interest on borrowing did not change their places, having a slight increase in the distribution of state money in 2015 in comparison to 2010 with 13% and 10% Change preposition
apply
accordingly
. The Rephrase
respectively
last
ones, Transport, Culture and leisure and Other
had a slight decrease in money distribution and stayed Correct pronoun usage
others
also
with the smallest proportions
in 2015 with roughly the same percentage (1%).Submitted by zavkidm on
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