The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map displays the differences between a shipyard
area
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in 1980 and the present time.
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, a significant change has been found where it used to be a real
dock
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for ships,
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now they converted the whole
area
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for recreation purposes by adding several visitors' accommodation In 1980, a parking road for ships was passed from the west part to the coast of the
area
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, located between warehouses. There were 3 storehouses, 2 of them in the north of the ship park and one
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the south side. Two cranes to carry away the boats were located on both sides of the pier. Compared to the present time, the real
dock
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was cleared and modernised into a boat museum which is still located on the same road. A few amenities have been added on the left and the right of its
dock
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, connected by a bridge. Two warehouses which previously were situated at both sides of the
dock
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have been demolished and developed into a learning centre, sailing club, and a playing zone for children. Meanwhile, on the south side of the
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, people will find their hostelry
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as
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, apartments, and where to park their vehicles. A convenient river walk
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lies right in front of their hostel.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, dock with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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