Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure the logical flow of ideas from introduction through body paragraphs to conclusion. It's important to present ideas in a clear, organized manner, which includes logical sequencing and paragraphing.
coherence cohesion
Include an introductory paragraph that clearly states the topic and your thesis, as well as a concluding paragraph that summarizes the main points and restates your position. Both are necessary for a complete essay structure.
coherence cohesion
Back up main points with relevant examples or evidence. Each main point should be elaborated on and supported by specific details or reasons.
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Include specific examples or evidence to illustrate your points. Whenever possible, use concrete details to provide more depth to your arguments.
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- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
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