The diagram below shows how rocks are created and destroyed in the rock cycle

The diagram below shows how rocks are created and destroyed in the rock cycle
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gives information about the process of how
rocks
are created and destroyed. The first
cycle
is that when
rock
erodes into sand and stones, it
would create
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a crushed sediment. The sediment
it self
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will transformed into 3 types of
rock
which is
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sedimentary
rock
, metamorphic
rock
and igneous
rock
. The second
cycle
is that when sedimentary
rocks
are faced with high pressure and temperature, sedimentary
rocks
turns
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into metamorphic
rocks
. When the
metamorphics
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rock
melted into magma and the cooling
occured
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occurred
, that's when igneous
rocks
were built. The third
cycle
is that after the sedimentary, metamorphic and igneous
rock
were
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formed under the surface, it will gradually
rises
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to the surface of the earth and repeat the
cycle
from square one. In conclusion, there are 3
cycle
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that happened in the
rock
cycle
. The first one is the erosion of
rock
that will
caused
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the creation of sediment and there are 3 types of
rock
that were built.
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